Thanks for the shout out.
Anyway, I love this story. It is about 1:00 PM here and I just woke up and you should have seen the happy dance I did when i saw an update.
On to the real review part.
I loved this chapter,,as i do all the chapters. You seem to have consistency with events and character personalities that in many cases are hard to keep up with and sometimes bleed into one another, but your story hasn't done that yet (and with your writing, I very highly doubt it ever will unless it's part of the plot). This idea is unique and the way you execute it is just brilliant. Please keep it up. I can't wait until Sunday-ish for updates ;)
Much love and props,
Rae