Who should Harry get together with? I say Susan Bones with her aunt head of MLE it could have some interesting sub plots to make this story more interesting. As this story is just starting out can you have it more fleshed out in later chapters, the first chapter reads more like an outline than a story a very interesting outlinebut still an outline. Harry interacting more with the ladies and protecting them either verbaly or physicaly to show how he grew into his personality weather he was tault to fight as a streetfighter or the more structured martial arts or even both along with magic. You can also have the ladies have special skils teach him so thatwhen he meets other wizards they will constantly underestamate him. I will enjoy what you do with this fic as it's start is originial and I hope you can keep it so.