Review for We're Both On Borderline Obsession

We're Both On Borderline Obsession

(#) Life_is_42 2007-07-01

wow. bden is on the war path! it's smexyful. jk i know he's yours. :D

so...memmos! (memerable moments combined...)

"Who?" Alice asked tiredly. She was so tired...she had rings, dark rings, under her eyes, and it was obvious that it wasn't makeup that was smudged. It was actually her looking like a ghost. Her face was pallid except for the dark rings. Her hair was pulled into a messy bun, and even then, her hair had a bit of dandruff and stringiness to it. All in all, Alice could have been described as a zombie.

i feel as if i look like that sometimes XD i have DAYS like that. but woo hoo. poor alice. you do such great descriptions.

Brendon looked to Ryan, who was already pushing Sarah and Liz out, saying, "Come on, let's just leave 'em alone. Let's phone Jon and Spencer to tell 'em that Alice is back or something..." and sounds of protests of Sarah yelping, "But this is the good part!" and then a response of Liz mumbling, "I've been telling you guys over and over again that the both of them will start arguing in two seconds..."

Lol! you're awesome at humor! just the right amount to go along with the angstyier bits. it flows together so nicely. honestly i'm jealous of your writting abilities! my writting turns fluffy and cliche, i wish i could write like you, i honestly do!

luve you.

send the love to the boys too.

xoxo

Liz and Jon

Author's response

Best descriptions come from experiences. XD That's why YOUR fics rock...they always come from something experienced. (haha, it was just for the experience...har har har...sorry I'm laughing at myself lol.)
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're back. waves at Jon
xoxo nat.