ARE YOU KIDDING? This is definitely one of my favorites. That was 'effing hilarious in the beginning. And the last part? FINALLY. w00t!
Quotes:
"He obviously didn't get very far before he felt a good punching to the balls. He cried, 'oof!' and sank to the ground. Because he was occupied with, well, trying to get back up and to recuperate, the reporters walked around-and all over him-to get a response out of Alice now." LMFAO. I love you.
"Brendon was still groaning, rolling about on the floor." Man, I can totally imagine that. xD.
"Face it Urie. Your life's just retarded." LOL. Loved that line. xD.
"except for a few nearby trailers...which would hurt Brendon's knuckles immensely if he hit them, and he certainly didn't want to end up like Pete when he got mad about one of his girlfriends." LOL. Again. Man, you were on a roll.
"Alice, though, became the wax, and Brendon was the fire. He slowly burned her out, melted her underneath him. Alice complied, and didn't actually complain. Their hot, passionate make-out slowed down, and they came to run out of oxygen. Soon it was a soft, romantic kiss." I love the simile in there. =).
Overall, amazing chapter. Definitely one of my favorites, so don't fret, okay? Fantastically written!
Author's response
Recently, you have been one of my most FAVORITE reviewers...you just make me smile whenever you post memorable quotes! I'm really proud and happy that you, out of all people, really just (benefitted?) as a reviewer...
This made my 4th of July really happy. Thank you SO much for reviewing!
xoxo-nat.