That was amazing.
I don't think I've ever seen anything so well written.
I think a lot of people have the hardest time writing something so dramatic, so...
There's not even a word to describe it!
I feel bad for Pete, and that was just amazing, heart wrenching to read.
It was almost as though I were right there watching him.
Major kudos, a lot of people would have had a hard time even coming close to that.
You did it without a hitch.
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I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's response
you make me blush. :)