Review for Out of Place and Under Dressed

Out of Place and Under Dressed

(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-07-07

awww!!!! i love how the mood shanges at the end. Like when rayn pounces on him it totally just i dunno, speeds up the story. Good job as always. update soon! AND NO MORE SHORT CHAPTERS lols.

Author's response

thank you! haha, and i will try!