Hey there!
Oh my god! You SO have to do a sequel! No doubt about it! I love the way you left it off too... that'll lead perfectly into a sequel. Aww, so cute-Jay's always there for her isn't he. :3 Anyways, amazing story! I loved it! It was exciting, sad, happy and always kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for the sequel. And if you don't write one then I'll send Cronus after you! evil laugh ;P. Just kidding, you know I luv ya! Anyways, amazing job!
~Tory;D