You've truely gained my interest ^.^
This is well written, and the plotline is very interesting :)
I like each of the characters personalities, though I feel Jareth is a bit soft..and it just feels a bit unexplained, you know?
I am really enjoying this, though ^_^ Cant wait to see what lays ahead in the labrynth!
You should consider placing this upon Fanfiction.net, as well. Alot more people review there.
Author's response
Thanks very much. In retrospect Jareth is a bit soft for his character but it seemed right when I was writing it. This story is available on FF.net under this pen name, along with a much wider range of stories and fandoms.