choke Am I that good at drawing?
You just get better and better, although Jay was a little OOC--he's got and aura that screams "This guy will never panic, get angry, show fear or display vaious other emotions over stiongly". All the same, I loved it and I will DIE if you don't update soon. In fact, I am going to bribe you by saying that if you update within the week, I will draw you a picture of whatever you what ;)
Author's response
Yes, you ARE that good. Thanks for the heads up on Jay- I was having a little trouble with his character, but he's also feeling a lot of pressure right now to believe what he's been told by those he trusts, or trust the guy who has never been a traitor... I tend to put leaders under lots of stress, so Jay's trying to handle these new thoughts and ideas, his relationship with Theresa without losing her to Neil, commanding a team he has trouble completely trusting, fighting Cronus, keeping everyone alive and not going insane. But I understand where you're comming from and after this outburst, I think we'll see Jay quiet down again ;) I'm doing my best to update again (working on the next chapter every time I can get some time away from the wonderful company that's visiting) so be ready to draw for me 8D ~Demenior