First off: I love you.
Okay, now that I've got that outta my system...I just love you're language - especially this part; "She looked like a balloon, ready to pop." In fact, the first part of this chapter is just amazing. I really like how Kaddie meets Ryan - it's realistic and sweet.
Okay, that's it for now...I'll keep on reviewing if you keep on updating! ;]
Author's response
oh my gosh, thanks :]
yeah, that who beginning i ended up rewiting like, 6 times. I really wasn't sure of the outcome.
but, thanks a lot, im glad you liked it :]