Review for Alice

Alice

(#) numer45user 2007-08-22

“When did we decide we were going to the park?” Alice asked mischievously. Brendon rolled his eyes, grabbed her hand, and pulled her out of the café. “Since I decided to. Duh.” Brendon said in his pretentious ultra-gay voice.

hahahah this part made me laugh out loud hahah

i love this story and im glad ficwad is back up. i was hoping you wouldnt forget the threequel.

youre a good writer! keep it up!
:)

Author's response

Haha, I re-read this review just recently and it made me laugh too. It's nice when a reviewer points something out I don't notice when I write! Kudos to you, my friend! =)