this story is so fucked up
it doesnt make sense
the POV's are totally fucked around with
and you skipped so much shit
it doesnt even make sense anymore
what is your band?
Author's response
???Fuck off man! And what's POV?? I'm not a pro ok, so don't fuck around and insult me. I like criticism, but there's no need to be rude. My band is Light Amongst the Darkness.