i always seem to find good stories, with a few chapters, defianately not enough to keep me satisified (though this truly is good and different from normal stories) yet...hasnt been updated for several months.
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but! this is good! funny, and different, like i said before, and youre a great writer, and i wish you'd update soon!
i had been reading your other story as well, but it hasnt been updated very often, so im probably going to have to start over cause id forgotten what had happened.
both are wonderful, and i hope you update these soon!
Author's response
wow! your review made me both happy, and sad. happy for your kind words and encouragement, always appreciated. I'm so glad that you think this story is different! i've read many on here that all seem ...similar, so i'm glad that i am meeting a goal! I'm also thrilled that you've read my other story, my baby, as well :)
I will say that my great fault in writting is my slow turn around between chapters. i either have too much homework, or have writers block. I feel as if i have to have enough build up, but writting build up can be tough (sometimes you just want to spill out with the entire plot! but that cheapens the reading experience). I'm going to finish both of these! it is my goal. i'm going to plod onwards until completion. I hope you stick with the stories, readers and reviews mean the world to me.
once again, thank you for your review: it is awesome to get such insightful feedback.
Lifey