You made a couple of slip ups in that with spellings, but I'm guessing you just pressed the wrong key on the keyboard. That's fair enough. We all do it.
Good chapter. Good (semi) cliffhanger.
Author's response
sorry i havent been responding. the alerts are down so I didnt actually know any one had reviewed! so thank you!! and im glad you're liking it. yeah the spelling mistakes are likely to just be typos but I'm not the best speller in the world either =(
im glad you're liking the fic so far. When I finnish posting I'll post a thing called a Tracklist with all the songs on. It's easier than saying at the end of every chapter what songs I've used and lets the chapter flow without me interupting it.
Woah! big reply! also remember I'm english so if you're american it could just be differences in language. =) thanks for reading and taking the time to review!