Review for Forbidden

Forbidden

(#) clutsy_93 2007-08-25

oh my god, all day i have been reading this story, i started from 3pm and now its 2am, i'm not a slow reader got interupted alot!!! holy shit man, this story contains alot of drama and everything love it so much.
also, fucking hell, i want to bash Lyn!! all throughout the story I felt like getting in the computer screen and killing her.
update fast! its suck an amazing story
and you are a very talented writer and keep up the good work.
ps, this story rocks!

:))