can i just point out that this isn't a super-harry story, as a super harry story requires that harry be more powerful and/or skilled than everyone else.
he is very powertful, but not moreso than many of the characters, it's his skill level that sets him apart, from the crowd - something i've being trying to find a way of putting into story form but failing so far.
keep up the good work, i look forward to future chapters
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Thanks for the kind words. Though people would argue that the first chapter made him out to be too strong...something I'm thinking about rewriting.
Anyway good luck with your stories. I'm not sure if this will help but when I try to write about the differance in skill level I try to keep in mind that no one is stuck at their level. As they fight and grow their experience will make them more dangerous. I try to portray that with the Death Eaters slowly becoming more dangerous for the Templar to deal with.