So far I like what you have written so far but it's what is not written that has me a bit leary. You have implied MPREG which leads me to think that this story may end up being slash. I don't particularly care for that and will let you know right now at the first sign I will quit reading. Most author's as a courtesy list SLASH/NO SLASH as a warning to the reader. Food for thought.
Author's response
I understand your concerns about slash and I did choose in the options listed as many of the warnings as I could. I don't choose to announce it at the beginning of each chapter as it isn't a major part of my story. Even though this is listed as an adult story I won't be writing explicit porn. While yes eventually their will be a relationship that is m/m/f and one that may be m/m it won't be happening for a long while as my intention is to tell a story not write sex. I hope you keep reading for a while as I am just putting the players in place to start a relationship; in otherwords they aren't formed yet.
I understand your concerns about slash and I did choose in the options listed as many of the warnings as I could. I don't choose to announce it at the beginning of each chapter as it isn't a major part of my story. Even though this is listed as an adult story I won't be writing explicit porn. While yes eventually their will be a relationship that is m/m/f and one that may be m/m it won't be happening for a long while as my intention is to tell a story not write sex. I hope you keep reading for a while as I am just putting the players in place to start a relationship; in otherwords they aren't formed yet.