Review for Harry's Return

Harry's Return

(#) Cateagle 2007-09-08

It's an interesting start but you really need to lay more of a back story about how Harry came to leave the Dursley's and get involved with Sirius, Remus, and Tonks.

having said that, it reads reasonably well, though with some punctuation problems here and there (be glad to beta if you still need one). It does sound like an interestin AU to follow, though.