Review for The First Kiss

The First Kiss

(#) pyrotechnicist 2007-09-11

well things are just getting worse and worse aren't they?
jeez depressing.
i want Olivia + The dad to die in a mysterious car accident or sumthing, u know crushed by a falling tree?
jeez well one day maybe hopeful grin
haha neway good fic, am enjoying it
xoxox