I like this, especially how you came up with the "out of control" aspect. I think Harry's behavior is a bit extreme, but then again, it could be the power that is driving him that way. It's too bad that Hermione is having so many problems at school because of Harry though. Maybe Harry ought to put in a quick appearance there and shake things up a little.
If Dumbledore or some other wizard/witch is sincere about helping Harry, would he accept their help? That's the question I'm trying to answer for myself. Hermione obviously wants to help him but is she really qualified to do so? Emotions aside, how much knowledge and experience does she need?
Looking forwards to more!