OMG!! what a bastard!!!
yeah....i've basically repeated what everyone else has said...i've had a bad day....i need to take my anger out on something...
anyhoo....i really think she should end up with frank but thats for my own enjoyment. so seeing there aren't many bob romance storie i think she should end up with bob.
or, if you really wanted to give the story a twist, bob's parents could be like "how about we adopt mary?" and then they could be all upset and have a secret affair thingy!
^^you don't actually have to pay attention to that.
you're writing is really good! keep it up!!
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Author's response
omg i was thinking the exact same thing when i started writing this story lol!
thanks for the ideas lol
it really helps...
yeshhhh evertime someone reviews this chap its always, "That bastard!"
anyways thanks
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