A very nice start to what looks to be quite the interesting Dark!Harry fic. You've made a good start and I'll be quite interested in seeing where it goes from here.
Bravo!
Author's response
Thank you.
The story is in the mean time finished on http://wimvincken.18.forumer.com, but it is such pain to post the full story here on FicWad. Maybe when I have time I will post it.