Review for Clandestine Industries Presents: disasteRomance

Clandestine Industries Presents: disasteRomance

(#) glindapsawyer 2007-09-23

i love sooo much about this chapter!
brendon/soap guitar bonding
post set sweat has a cool ring to it, and can easily be switched to something dirtier...
delving into andy's thoughts was super awesome. i felt bad for him, because he got ditched and he was worrying. but then it's like soap won't cheat. andy is made of greatness.
rock paper scissor is the only way to make decisions.
i haven't heard the word bodacious is quite some time, but it should certainly be used for someone in Cobra.
Nate would've been so much better off just taking the truth.
i hope you find inspiration and that school becomes less hectic!
i seriously adore how you include so many characters, but its not all over the place and out of control. it's rad.
lovelovelovelovelovelovelove
:D