This is a great story. So far i've only read 1 chapter, but it is amazing. I feel like what Patrick is feeling in your story. I feel his sorrow and loss. I love reviewing stories, i know how good it makes the author feel. It makes authors feel like their story is wanted and i enjoyed that too, but one of my stories on a different site didn't get any reviews for a long time and i never had the interest to pick it up. Im glad that i can at least review your awesome story!!!!