Just read the whole story, and I thought it was really funny. For some reason, I like the really insane scenes better than all the drama, though I suppose the drama's fine if it makes a point. Guess what I'm trying to say is that humour is a really strong point for you. So please, please, put some more! And keep updating - personally I think it's great!
Author's response
oh wow you read all the...how many chapters it is? 74? something like that? i don't remember...anyway, i appreciate the effort..as for the drama vs. comedy, I'm really trying to balance the two out...i mean, if it's just comedy, it gets annoying after a while and if it's just drama, you'd get sick of that too so I'm trying to put equal amount of both...but I'll take that to heart and see where i can't put more comedy. thanks for the feedback!