Hey this is outstanding. Its well written and has a great plot. It also grabs ahold of you to the point where you dont wanna let go but sadly so far there is only this one chapter I guess.
I always like the grouping of Tracy Davis, Daphne Greengrass and (fem) Blaise Zabini. I dont know I always thought of them as best friends and would make a good group of wives in a harem type story. So of course I also am looking forward to reading this story with Tracy as his betroth. I also think especially the way you sorta introduced her that she would make a great wife, her being a slytherin will help him greatly especially with bringing out his slytherin side.
Also this army of the ages sounds really cool, hope we hear more and soon!