Review for Harry's Return

Harry's Return

(#) Isebas 2007-10-06

I have to say that I really enjoyed reading this story so far and I hope that you continue with it. I agree with silverleafhp about the story moving a little fast and also about the action scenes. I think you could have added a little more and it would make them a lot better. Harry/Tonks is by far my favorite pairing in the Harry Potter series,Harry/either Black sisters is a close second. I like the more mature and calculating Harry. He loves to have fun and piss people off. If it wasn't for his hatred of Death Eaters and hurting of innocents I would say he would definately go into Slytherin. Of course I think if he was a true slytherin he wouldn't be in the house but placed in one of the other houses, preferably Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff. Nobody would suspect a Hufflepuff of hiding a true slytherin personality. Working behind the scenes and everthing.I can't wait for an update. Keep up the good work I think this story has potential.

Author's response

Thanks for the review. I Was thinking Hufflepuff for basicaly the same reasons you mentioned