Wow... =O That is one of the hottest things I've read on this site!!! ^_^ Frerard rocks!!! And wow...
That was an awesome story! Let's look passed the slashy-ness for a minute...
You wrote that brilliantly and I couldn't find any grammar, punctuation or spelling errors. I don't have any criticism at all!!!
Author's response
Thank You ... Nice To Know It Was .. Erm ... Appreciated .. Lol.