Review for I'd End My Days with You in a Hail of Bullets

I'd End My Days with You in a Hail of Bullets

(#) xImRadx 2007-10-18

Ahhh yay! You updated! Haha I love the dramatic stwist you made. It makes things so much more interesting. I think you should make Frank and Gee try to be all cool and front of him, but keep like sneaking away to do stuff together and eventually Bobs gets suspicious that they both keep disapearing at the same time and catches them like making out somewhere, freaks out but eventually gets over it and then they have to explain. Hah, that would be good.

Anyways, good chapter of course. Much love. Update soooon.