Oh, and by the way, I do like it.
I think it and you get better with each part.
Author's response
haha thax. i'll update soon, or once i get over some writter's block. But thax for the encouragement. You're the only person who is reading it, it feels like. And you might just end up having a guest appearance. :D
Oh and when I put you in, I'm going to use the same discription as in "I'll see ya when I see ya." Okay?