Hey! I'm a new reader. I totally agree with everyone above. I also think that you should arrange some kind of car crash. Perhaps Gerard should die. I find I don't like him as much. I like Jamia though, she's a sweetheart. And Frank is pretty snazzy too.
You know, if you reject my idea to kill someone-slash-many-someones, heh, I think you'd do well to make Lyn and Marcus get together. It would be so random.
Anyway, I want to make this long to show you how much I care. Cause I do care. This is good, and I approve, and I would like you to finish it so that you can end my agonised waiting and wondering and all the other things I do that bother me.
Kay, I guess this is long enough...did I mention I love it? Well, I do!