I like your story. I have never watched Doctor Who but I can still follow the story pretty good. I hope Evan and Hermione meet up again. I am confused about the whole Barty Crouch Jr. thing. Where does he fit into it? Keep up the great work.
Author's response
The Ten Doctor and Barty Crouch Jr. are played by the same actor. So I deceided to work that in to my story. When I did research in to the older Doctor Who episodes I found that there was a couple where the Doctor ran in to someone who look just like him. This happened when the actors wanted to expand what they did on the show by playing an extra role.