You officially made my 'Patrick can do no harm' bubble burst. He seems nice and all but honestly he is still a guy and human which means he is perfectly capable of doing idiotic things just like any other man on earth. What I wouldn't give to walk into the story and just smack him once real good for being so damn heartless. For such a young one you seem to know of the pains love can bring. Your story is very honest and very true to real life well atleast my life. I really like it. Hope you update it soon.
~K.R.
Author's response
Glad you like it =)
Im trying to make this as realistic as possible.
I didn't want it to be all cliche and fake.
To be honest, I never been in love, but I have felt like my hearts been broken (unintentionally) and I also read alot. lol.
An Update is coming, and Thanks!
Zaydee