wow. I love this. well... i actually hate that Patrick is being so... odd. but the way you write the story is incredible. I like the contrast between the acceptable mood of the Christmas holidays compared to Patrick's cold personality now-a-days.
I don't know what happened to him, but I hate the 'new' Patrick. Not much else to critique. i loved the update. Keep writing and give me hope for Molly and Patrick's future (if there is any D:)