Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) hopeanne 2007-11-14

I thought I reviewed this but either I didnt click or it disappeared or what.
But I am at a loss for words. This was such an improvement over your last 'smexxi' scene. I thought it was hot. But story line wise Im like WTF!!
Is she dreaming? flashback? what???
Ugh, its the worst kinda cliffhanger!!!
Thats like the thing I hate/love about your story is theres no time line!
But just the fact that it involves someone other then Gee worries me. Like if shes dreaming of someone else thats not good. Shes suppose to be dreaming of Gee. And if its a flashback- fuck. She cheated on Gee? Or she is cheating on Gee?
Im worried.
And make it logical cause I swear if you blow over this with out an explanation I will hurt you...

Author's response

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