nice start for the fic...i dont know why ron is given a major role in the canon coz he seems to be the griffindor version of malfoy plus he is an idiot to boot! the only thing he has running around in his head is food and quidditch...for a chess player he is pretty dumb aint he?the max limit is he can be comic relief nothing more...as for the canon, to be truthful it has more holes than a sieve..just one thing make the pairings seem logical unlike the canon...update soon and keep up the good work