The costumes sound gorgeous. All the details about them are great, and I'd be pushing for flesh colored straps too.
This story was awesome before, with your background in baton and performing, but now with the panic guys in it, it's a million times better. Brendon crushing is too cute as is the girls being so embarassed.
Looking forward to the next update!
:D
Author's response
If you want to see actual pictures of the costumes, I've posted them on my yahoo group: groups.yahoo.com/JustfortheAttention