I loved the story. I'm still confused about a few things. I love your writing style, but you could use a few more discriptions. Keep up the good work. :D You could use a few more spin offs on whats going on in Dani, Brendan and Spencer's lifes. No one cares about Brett. [[Cause he's a fucktard.]] XP No offence intended. That being said, I know the first chapter made me want to cry. :P Please update soon so I can find out more about Kate and Ryan.