This was a beautiful story. Not sappy, not turning Iruka into a nagging woman, not making Kakashi out of character. It all seemed perfect. I was brought here by Lei-sam's illustrated version and I can see why she likes it so. Definitely one of my favorite Naruto fandom stories and could easily stand alone with different names, as an original piece of fiction instead of fan fiction. I particularly enjoyed your attention to detail, the way you tied things together, and how you were able to describe fight scenes and yet I didn't get bored and wander off [highly unusual]. Thank you for writing it because it was a pleasure to read.