Haha, I know exactly what you mean about your first story being your baby! :) Same goes for mine!! Even though the beginning of MY story is pretty rubbish, I still wouldn't delete it!!! :)
Anyway, that was awesome!!! If I lived near a hospital where one of the band members were, I would DEFINATELY be there, yelling at them to get better soon! =)
I love this story, and I'll be sad to see it finish but hey, all good things must come to an end.