AWE!
I Loved it!
Thanks so much for updating and using my idea! You put it into way better words then I ever could! :D
If you like Patrick fanfics then you should maybe check mine out if you get the time. A selfish plug to get veiws? Who me? Never! hahaha. but seriously. I would love some feedback on mine from someone else with an imagination. ;)
Can't wait for more!