This was incredibily epic. I love it when people write Pete as a sweet heart, and you do it very well. I almost hope she's pregnant, so the have nothing to hide. Written very well.
On the topic of Ashlee; the only thing I don't like about her is, if she claims she was all punk rock and what not, isn't punk rock about being comfortable with yourself? Then she goes kind of malibu barbie on us. But still...
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I actually agree with you. If punk is about being okay, how exactly does all of those plastic surgeries fit in? I could understand if it was somehow a life threatening thing she was fixin, but last I checked, none of it has been. But anywho ^^ That makes another person that mentioned her being preggers... I'm beginning to see a trend here lol. Thanks for the review ^^. And again, thank you for your compliment on how I written Pete ^^ I love writing him as sweet at heart. I think I've read 3 fics this week where he was some tempermental asshole. And I must admit, go back to my hotel chapters, it came out, but Casey made him "Go from kill to fluff" as Tricky put it ^^.