awesome installment. I really enjoy your writing style, and I like the good drama element you incorporate along with the humor you add. I feel bad for Pete now, but I love what the last line implies about his personality and character. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's response
Hehe, of course you can't wait to see what happens next my dear, you ARE my muse after all ^^. But thank you for the writing style compliment ^^.