Review for Lucy's Holiday (and FOB!)

Lucy's Holiday (and FOB!)

(#) girlinthemoon 2007-12-16

I'm sorry this is the end of the story. But I enjoyed reading it.
Hope to read more if your work soon.

Author's response

I decided I would complete this story now because I felt like this was s much as I could do with it. If I had continued I don't think you would have seen my best writing so I finished the story here knowing I'd be proud of it. If I had continued maybe my proudness would have disappeared. Can't wait to get on to some new stories which I hope you will enjoy reading!