FicWad

Great story so far... Loved that Hermione became "1st Friend", but would've liked for Ron to play a bigger role too.

I was hoping for a harem-story for a while, but I guess it won't include Ginny -- too bad (if you could work Ginny back in, that would be great)... guess it could include Hermione and Luna -- and perhaps Fleur. Hope Harry really is successful and get Fleur to teach him about sex (and then maybe Hermione allows Harry to teach it to her).

Speaking of Veelas... will Harry rescue Gabrielle? Will there be something there that will blossom into something more later on?

I hope we'll see more of Hermione's family, and that some sort of truce can be reach with Hermione's sister. Is she too a witch? Cold she develop feelings for Harry?

I really would like to see how Harry-noticing-girls-everywhere will pan out...

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The story is well written, and I mostly like what you've done to the characters and over all storyline.

Keep up the great work, and please update soon.

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Wow.

Okay, first; Gabrielle is like nine years old, dude.

Second, no. Harry will not make up with Herm's sister. She's a bitch, and Harry likes to laugh at her.

Also, ... NO HAREMS! I am seriously getting tired of saying that. I you ever find an actual girl who will consend to be in a harem with you, then I will watch as Armaggedon destroys our planet.

This is a Harry/Multi story, but not at the same time. Harry is a player.

Thanks for the review.