I can't believe that english isn't your native language, the chapters so far are so well written! I normally don't read anything except for Frerard stories on here, but this one has some great potential; i love the main character already =)
Author's response
Thank you! I read a lot in English, I guess that has helped improve it. I'm putting a lot of effort in this story and I'm trying to make the characters look as real as they can. Of course, the main character is my baby, too. I think I'm gonna write more soon. Maybe when I'm finished with this one, I'll write a Frerard :) I'm slowly getting obsessed with it.