“A yellow polka dot bikini,” She wore a itsy bitsy teenie weenie yellow polka dot bikini that she wore for the fist time today! yes thank you thank i do derserve props from my peeps...just kidding didn't right that i'm not THAT good!
Yes there were some very "awwweee" moments! and i'd love to see more!
Well that was certainly very cute and your fics get better and awesomer as you progress as fic writer!!!!