Review for While Love's On The Line

While Love's On The Line

(#) crystalcrash 2007-12-27

Updates make me happier than they should =)
Nice chapter. About the rating... you should change it depending on what will happen in future chapters. If it gets a little too hot (if it's even possible for a Frerard to get "too" hot lol), than change it to R.
Frank's girlfriend is a bitch, i wouldn't have been able to control myself like Gee did.
Anyways, nice writing. Very cute story. Can't wait for the bitch to be out of it xD
Update soon and we'll all love you more