ohmygod!!!!
that was just terrible!!! there is no other word for it!!!! (i mean what trick did, not your writing!!!!!- eek)
i swear my jaw dropped in shock!!! i mean, i know he was being an ass, but in HER BED?!?!! come on!!!!!
great update!! cant wait for the next!!
cheers!
Author's response
thanks!
I love how everyone has this "PatrickisPerfectHeCanDoNoHarm" thing going lol.
I love Patrick to death, but everyone is human and everyone is capable of making mistakes.
Thats one thing I really wanted to Convey with this story.