Hey, that was really funny. I liked it...but it got kind of confusing because it switched over too often and you couldn't tell if it was in 1st or 3rd persona. But that's just me...I'm picky about stuff like that...but I should probably shut up now. Lol.
But yes, it was very funny, and I like it because it was kind of over-exaggerative. All in all, very good. Nice effort. I love it.
Love,
J-Rawr